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求助一下,這個(gè)英文語(yǔ)句的校正該如何修改呢?
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論文已經(jīng)接收了正在校稿。但是在系統(tǒng)校稿中提出了一個(gè)問(wèn)題,讓修改下面這個(gè)語(yǔ)句。但是我感覺(jué)這個(gè)英文語(yǔ)句也可以這樣表達(dá)吧,不知道該如何修改了,有懂的大神能指點(diǎn)一下嗎? This is a fragment; please revise: If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are essentially peeled off or unevenly worn, which will cause the main working parts to almost lose their rolling action. |
金蟲(chóng) (著名寫(xiě)手)
金蟲(chóng) (著名寫(xiě)手)
新蟲(chóng) (正式寫(xiě)手)
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原句只有 IF... ,沒(méi)有 what WILL happen,所以不是完整句子。這句話可以改成: If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are essentially peeled off or unevenly worn, the main working parts will lose their rolling action. 不過(guò)我還是覺(jué)得里面的兩個(gè)搭配是(錯(cuò)誤的)中式表達(dá),改改更好: (1) layers are ESSENTIALLY peeld off(essentially=basically,說(shuō)不通),你是不是想說(shuō) are MOSTLY peeled off? (2) lose their rolling action?啥意思?本意是 stop rolling? dysfuncion? 個(gè)人意見(jiàn),僅供參考 |

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