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無名小冰冰金蟲 (著名寫手)
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求助一下,這個英文語句的校正該如何修改呢?
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論文已經(jīng)接收了正在校稿。但是在系統(tǒng)校稿中提出了一個問題,讓修改下面這個語句。但是我感覺這個英文語句也可以這樣表達吧,不知道該如何修改了,有懂的大神能指點一下嗎? This is a fragment; please revise: If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are essentially peeled off or unevenly worn, which will cause the main working parts to almost lose their rolling action. |
金蟲 (著名寫手)
金蟲 (著名寫手)
新蟲 (正式寫手)
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原句只有 IF... ,沒有 what WILL happen,所以不是完整句子。這句話可以改成: If the abrasion-resistant layers of the grinding roller are essentially peeled off or unevenly worn, the main working parts will lose their rolling action. 不過我還是覺得里面的兩個搭配是(錯誤的)中式表達,改改更好: (1) layers are ESSENTIALLY peeld off(essentially=basically,說不通),你是不是想說 are MOSTLY peeled off? (2) lose their rolling action?啥意思?本意是 stop rolling? dysfuncion? 個人意見,僅供參考 |

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